In this chapter Lina and Doon were discovering for evidence to proofth that the mayor was robbing them.then they thougth about it. and found out that they needde to find the missing door of something.
I think that you need to rewrite it because you misspelled some word's and that's not what they were doing they found out that the major was stelling from them then they told one of the gard's and the gard said he will handle it.
I think that you need to rewrite it because you misspelled some word's and that's not what they were doing they found out that the major was stelling from them then they told one of the gard's and the gard said he will handle it.
ReplyDeleteYour summary was very confusing for me because you made alot of mistakes in your summary and it dose not make sense.
ReplyDeletei dis agree because that is what i said
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